J. Haux

It's the sport of...sparring? Swordfighting? What they were doing. I'm a (novice)fencer myself, and you portrayed it so well, I wondered if you were one. I'm so sorry you're sick! ...

Try editing before posting...actually, I think that's a rule. :) I didn't notice it in your other stories I read. This was the first time you never had any periods, ...

You'd think they'd pick it up on Microsoft Word wouldn't you? I think one reason for that is that, for example, "She ranted" is a genuine sentence all by itself. ...

I can't tell you how pleased I am that y'all like them. (OMGosh, I said "y'all") :D

I'm so glad! :D

An onomatopoeia is a word that is used to describe a sound of some sort, like "Honk!" "Ping!" "Ring!" "Errr---eeek!" "Moo!" "Oink!" "eee-aww!" "Boom!" etc...And the one onomatopoeia we had ...

Well, that's not that big a mistake. :) I'll go check them out. I've only posted...poems, and they're not my speciality either. You can look at them if you want. ...

...Maybe it gives it the sense of repetitive inner dialogue, when you're trying to calm down: "Calm down, calm down, relax, relax, calm down, calm down, relax, relax..." You know. ...

It's called iced tea. :D Depending on who makes it, its either good or...not so good. I just had iced raspberry tea, and it was delicious! I don't think it ...

Did I say that? Did you say that? No. I hardly EVER drink tea cold. I find it disgusting. Unless it's flavored, in which case...

...But it's your job as the writer to pay attention to grammar. By the way, your avatar threw me off, too.

On second thought, I think I'll decide it's brilliant, because you titled it "rush" so I think my first interpretation was the right one...I hope. If it was the second ...

lol :D Complete and UTTER nonsense. I'm glad you...enjoyed it. *laughs* I didn't think anyone would reply. lol But I'm glad it was you, Dusky, and that you read it ...

Dun dun dun!!! :wink:

P.S. It's okay that you didn't proofread, but you could at least have run spellcheck to catch those words that were almost unrecognizable.